Könnte jmd. sich meine Statistik analysiere bitte angucken?

Hallo, ich bin in der 9.klasse und schreibe bald eine Englisch Klausur, wo ich eine Statistik analysierieren muss, daher habe ich zu dieser Stastik auf dem Bild, eine analyse geschrieben und wollte fragen, ob sich jmd. diese angucken kann und schreiben könnte, was ich hätte besser machen können...? Wäre wirklich sehr nett und hilfreich!! Dankeschön schonmal im voraus:)

Meine Analyse zu der Statistik:

"This table gives us information about the amount of pocket money per week in diffrent states like Germany, Turkey and the UK. It is divided in diffrent categories: kids under 5 age, kids from 5 to 10, 10 to 15 and 15-plus. If you compare the UK with germany you can see that kids under 5, 5 to 10, 10 to 15 or 15-plus get always more money than kids in germany, which isnt really suprising because I heard from many people that things in the UK are way more expencive than things in Germany. The table also shows that in the UK kids from the age 10 to 15 get the same pocket money as kids from the age 5 to 10, which is if you compare this with kids, the same ages in Germany and Turkey really intresting, because in this states kids who are older get more money. The table you can see gives us the information that the older kids become, the more money they get and I think its because of the rising costs the older you get, I mean if you compare the costs of a T-shirt or something else for kids under 5 years and kids from 5 to 10 you notice that it costs more for the kids from 5 to 10."

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Negative Argumente für Künstliche Intelligenz sind nicht gut genug?

Guten Abend meine Mitmenschen,
ich musste heute Leider die Erfahrung machen, das meine Negativ Argumente bezogen auf die Künstliche Intelligenz für den Englisch Unterricht nicht gut genug waren. Mir wurde gesagt das diese Argumente nicht stark genug sind bzw. das Example nicht "Real" sei, wie z.B. im zweiten Argument wo ich über das Beispiel von Siri und Alexa rede und diese eigentlich keine AI vorweise.

Hier die drei Negativ Argumente die ich vorgezeigt habe, als Referenz:

AI can hurt your data privacy, because the data could be misused for controlling what you see online or identity theft.
For Example smart speaker like your phone's microphone or alexa picking up a conversation about your interests and influence your decisions and purchases online, can turn the web into a constant stream of personalized marketing.
AI is increasing the laziness of humans, because of automating many tasks that previously required problem-solving and critical thinking. For Example chatbots like ChatGPT make it possible to solve the problem without even being in need to do a research inside the internet.
AI can effect people negatively, because systems often inherit biases from the data they are trained on, leading to discrimination. For Example hiring platforms that learn of historical data might replicate these biases and result in unfair treatment of job applicants.

Halten sollte ich mich beim schreiben der Negativ Argumente an das Schema
CLAIM
REASON
EXAMPLE
Womit ich demnach diese Argumente auch meinerseits eigentlich gut formulieren konnte, diese jedoch nicht gut genug sind.

Falls jemand eventuell Tipps, Verbesserungsvorschläge etc. haben sollte, empfange ich diese mit offenen Armen.

Mfg

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Englisch text?

Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

 

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

 

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

 

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Ist das ein guter Comment?

Nowadays the internet is becoming a bigger concern due to its unlimeted access. So its getting riskier to be online especially for children as there are many threats, such as fake profiles. However, is the internet really that dangerous?

First of all, I think the internet makes us very dependet, which can lead to developing addidictive behaviors, impacting both our personal lives and careers. For example during a family dinner, there is less conversation and more time spent surfing the internet. This can lead to conflict, just as when someone constantly checks their phone at work or in the school.

The next point is we are not always aware of the dangers online, because the internet is has become part of our everday life. From my point of view is this a big Problem, especially for young people, because they can visit websites that aren’t safe for them. For instance it can also be dangerous for children, as older people can pretend to be younger and attract children.

The next argument is that the internet also offers many benefits, such as educational plattforms, that help young people study for school. In my experience the internet provides learning materials and online courses, for example, which can help save time by avoiding long commutes.

Lastly its important to say that the internet make it easy to do many things online, which is often faster. For example shopping online is usually easier than going to a store especially when time is short.

All in all I can say the internet has good and negatives sites. One the one hand is the internet not good for children, because there are many dangers on the internet, on the othder hand you can benefit from internet.

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